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Comments Yay, thanks for the critique. X3
Let's see... The comma's in this one annoyed me quite a bit, as I didn't want to make the sentences too long, so I'm not too happy with them on some points either. And I usually consider the description to be something were you write about the art you uploaded, like what you're trying to say with it, or what inspired you.  No problem.
You got a point on the discription, but if you have nothing to write there, you can just use a paragraph and such. As I've seen some artwork on deviantart, and then look at the discription, I only see a dash or a dot. Oh well, everybody has their own way of describing. |
Sta.sh
the comma's sometimes look weird as they are in their position.
you did good on this one. keep it up.
It will be certain to give people goosebumps, just like me. You know how to get people to think about this.
And it really has a meaning. the topic is very original.
don't worry. The discription doesn't have to be filled with words that people care more about than the poem itself. Maybe put a paragraph of the poem in it? That wants to make people read it. good job. really.